my story. (please don't comment)

[DR. VonTrap]

ive been trying to find a home for my story to be published and this forum seems like the bast bet. if you would like to comment please don't post a comment on here but find some other way to contact me. i say that cause if half way through there's a rondom post saying "dude awsome story!" or "dude really bad story!" it will kinda ruin the mood. ok here goes nothing.

[DR. VonTrap]

This story doesn’t really have a title and the main character is nameless, so if you have any suggestions please comment with them. :-c) (French smiley) thanks

CHAPTER 1

I ran down the corridor, all I could hear was the sound of my footsteps and my heavy breathing; but I knew all to well that soon I would be able to hear the steady whirring of the guards. Every time I breathed in, my lungs screamed out in pain as they were frozen by the cold air in these tunnels. I knew there was little point running; they would catch up with me soon enough and I would be taken back to that hell hole, for my short stay on this earth to come to an unpleasant end. “Fwump fwump fwump fwump fwump fwump fwump fwump.” Damn, one of those seekers had found me. I felt the air around me pulse as its Æther drive propelled it forward. When I turned round I saw that it was almost on top of me. I dropped to the ground, rolled up again, facing it, and threw a punch at it

 As the metal of its body, and the metal of my hand connected there was a sharp clang that echoed around the whole tunnel, I put all my strength into pushing the seeker back; and my auxiliary engines kicked in to help, but the seeker and I were still locked together; until, shing, one of my arm blades flew out and stabbed it in-between 2 of its armour plates. Pressurised steam burst into the room, spraying everything with a thin layer of water. The seeker convulsed and dents appeared all over its chassis, as its Æther field collapsed pulling it into a single point which disappeared. Shaken from my (admittedly small) battle, I got back up and staggered along the tunnel, towards what I hoped was the exit from the place that I had called home since I was born, but which I knew was like hell on earth.

Omg, if you haven’t figured it out yet the main character has a fake arm and everything’s powered by steam. If you want me to continue the story please contact me saying so, cause my last story was so bad that no one ready it and I didn’t even do a 2nd chapter. (c: (smiley with a big nose)