New Writer - Need Some Volunteer Readers

[Xbwalker]

First of all, thanks mod for deleting my old post. Now I can post a proper one.

If anyone here is interested in helping me as I go along, I am about 12 chapters into a steampunk/fantasy/scifi novel. I have done a bit of refining and it's now ready for a few people to read in on. I can PM you a google doc with permissions to comment (if you see something that needs changing, you can comment on it without changing it).

I look forward to your feedback. 

Thank you all

[NoirMagus]

I actually copied your first (now deleted) post into a word document and started to go through and make some comments. When I'm done I'll let you know.

Are you all good with a word document, I could go into google docs if you'd prefer?

Cheers,

Gareth

[Xbwalker]

I actually copied your first (now deleted) post into a word document and started to go through and make some comments. When I'm done I'll let you know.

Are you all good with a word document, I could go into google docs if you'd prefer?

Cheers,

Gareth

Word is fine. In there interest of privacy, it's best to message it to me though. I've also made a number of changes to CH1 since then. Ill PM you the link.

[Xbwalker]

I sent you the link but, there's nothing in my forum outbox. Not sure if it went through. If not, let me know.

[Kensington Locke]

I actually copied your first (now deleted) post into a word document and started to go through and make some comments. When I'm done I'll let you know.

Are you all good with a word document, I could go into google docs if you'd prefer?

Cheers,

Gareth

Word is fine. In there interest of privacy, it's best to message it to me though. I've also made a number of changes to CH1 since then. Ill PM you the link.

As he already started on Word, that makes sense.

From my own experience, I really like doing the comments via Google Docs.  Much easier to resolve and discuss.  Having gotten used to it, I loathe the days of tryng to review a marked up copy while trying to make changes on the master that has since "moved" since the copy was sent out.

[Xbwalker]

Thanks guys. I have made quite a few changes. Ch1 is slimmed down a bit and Ch2 was cleaned up using lessons learned. Keep the notes coming

[Xbwalker]

Ok, chapter 1-3 are now cleaned up. The rest is still first draft raw. Thanks for the continued suggestions on the google doc!

[madamemarigold]

If you still desire a reader I would be glad to aide you.

[Lord Badgersworth]

Do you still want people to read, because I am happy to.