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Author Topic: Looking for feedback for my new novel  (Read 1352 times)
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« on: September 20, 2013, 04:55:43 am »

The work in question is The Revolution Beyond Time. It is the third book in the Infini Calendar series.

The year is 1889 (Infini Calendar). Twelve-year-old Nelly Flowers is accompanying her parents on a journey to Wichita with the ultimate goal of staking a claim in the Oklahoma Land Run. However, when their airship is attacked by pirates--with Nelly the apparent target--she'll have to find the courage she isn't sure she has and entrust her life to mysterious new friends in order to save everyone. The dreaded Gnostagar have returned, and for the first time humans must journey to their world. Said humans are (somewhat) up to the task, but can a child, an Austrian cowgirl, a rebel Gnostagar and an anti-social Lincoln-hater really stop these shape-shifting monsters?

You can download the rough draft from http://depositfiles.com/files/he4nzvn9n. I would appreciate any feedback.
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« Reply #1 on: September 20, 2013, 10:12:26 am »

I just downloaded it and will post my comments when I finish it Smiley.
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« Reply #2 on: September 20, 2013, 11:07:59 pm »

Thanks. You in particular gave me valuable feedback on The Game Called Revolution, so it should be good.
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« Reply #3 on: September 24, 2013, 05:55:13 pm »

I do not know about good, but I just sent you a PM with my feedback Smiley.
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« Reply #4 on: September 24, 2013, 11:08:48 pm »

I just read it. Thanks! I'm always nervous before I read feedback, but yours was reassuring. I appreciate both your praise and your suggestions.
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« Reply #5 on: September 29, 2013, 11:52:04 pm »

BTW does anyone know if "penny dreadful" is capitalized?
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« Reply #6 on: September 30, 2013, 08:36:55 am »

I don't think it is, it is a common name and no part of it comes from a capitalized name.
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« Reply #7 on: September 30, 2013, 11:13:52 pm »

Got it. Thanks.
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« Reply #8 on: October 22, 2013, 04:23:50 am »

All right, the manuscript is done and I just finished converting it to Kindle format. I'm just waiting on my girl Char to create the cover.
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« Reply #9 on: November 12, 2013, 05:20:34 am »

The book is now available on Kindle for $3.99! Paperback version coming soon.
http://www.amazon.com/Revolution-Beyond-Infini-Calendar-ebook/dp/B00GM4X7M6/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1384229492&sr=1-1
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