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Author Topic: A story my Daughter wrote about a cog  (Read 278 times)
perkunasnz
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« on: July 06, 2012, 11:46:56 am »

My 11 year old daughter wrote this story. I thought it was neat so posted it

http://www.howtosteampunk.org/a-short-steampunk-story/
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« Reply #1 on: July 06, 2012, 01:25:26 pm »

That's very clever (and well written).  I enjoyed that.
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« Reply #2 on: July 06, 2012, 07:15:58 pm »

How very wonderful! I hope she continues to write about her mysterious cog. Thank you for sharing with us!
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« Reply #3 on: July 06, 2012, 09:08:25 pm »

I wondered where I'd put that radium cog.
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« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2012, 01:50:14 am »

Adorable
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« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2012, 07:15:17 am »

Well done.
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perkunasnz
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« Reply #6 on: July 08, 2012, 01:10:46 pm »

Thank you all.

I believe she's keen on writing more
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« Reply #7 on: July 08, 2012, 02:02:52 pm »

Thank you all.

I believe she's keen on writing more

I hope she does continue writing. It was a very nice short story.
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« Reply #8 on: July 09, 2012, 05:15:38 am »

What a great short story! The super short format is one of the trickier formats but she has pulled it off nicely..
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