Ok so Ive been playing around on the Brass Goggle minecraft server and I have an idea for a new build, not only that but its going to be a story so even if you don't play minecraft you can still follow it and enjoy.
I have the main story lined up but I cant tell you because you will find out as you play or read along with the finished version.
What I want are sub plots and little ideas to help expand it a little bit.I realise how hard that is going to be not knowing the full story but anything you throw at me Im sure I can manipulate to get in there somehow.
"The sinking of the Ocean Angel"
(these are the first rough notes so just wondering what people think and what they might like to add)
You wake up in a hospital bed in a makeshift military base. but everything seems so alien to you. You have been in hospital before but not like this, the technology its different. Its damn cold, dark quiet and you remember nothing. At the end of your bed is a clip board with a name on it (name not yet figured out-ideas appreciated) and a diagnosis (Amnesia).
You wonder around the base and realise that there is no one here. However there is alot of blood, weapons and spent ammunition.
You find some sort of powered screen, black background with white lettering, there is a small hand sized device with a wheel on it, you scroll down the information on the screen...it reads:
May 14th 1967
-Strange energy signal picked up in south Atlantic just off the coast of Antarctica.
-Military paranormal unit sent to investigate.
-Team find a cruise ship wrecked on the coast of Antarctica, ship look old, very old
-Base of operation set up to investigate
-full sweep of the ship find only 2 survivors (name of first character + another name) lock in an armoured panic room
-brought into base for medical treatment, Passports found on survivor1 (British -insert name) DOB: 27th February, 1888.
-ship identified - SS Ocean Angel - Ship disappeared without a trace on a cruise across Atlantic May 13th 1917[/glow]
-Survivor 2 has died from his injuries
-survivor 1 has yet to awaken
-12 Military personnel MIA
-strange noises reported from wreck
-4 more MIA personnel
-Communication are down, no known reason
End of log
You make your way to the surface but find that the base is surrounded by a large fence, it is emitting a strange energy, its like electrified but it feel different.
There is no way out from here.
You go back inside the base under the ice, there is a way onto the ship through a hole in the hull (this is where the ship hit the ice).
You go on board, more blood, the only lights come from lights that the military put up when exploring.
The ship is a complete wreck..........
You will have to get off but how......
Anyone interesting in reading the rest?
I will make the set on minecraft, the idea is to complete the sub plots with the overall aim of escaping.
I know how it will end but I want sub plots and other interesting stuff to throw in