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Author Topic: Building up the back-story to your 'Persona'?  (Read 506 times)
Bethune
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« on: April 21, 2010, 08:17:11 am »

Quite by accident - or perhaps good fortune - I, as a new member of this community, am drifting inexorably towards a persona. It's not something I planned, but I am now finding myself having fun with the notion of a alter ego and I do wish to explore how I might best develop this 'character' (for my own amusement as much as anything).

I have read the, most enjoyable, 'Persona names' thread in the Metaphysical section, and while there doesn't appear to be one overall hard and fast rule or method for formulating ones persona, I wonder if any of the community denizens have attempted to write a formal back-story to accompany their 'other selves' - placing themselves into a historical context?

(I note that there are a few thread already about developing a persona, but this is more about developing the back-story - a subtle difference I know, but one biased more to research and historical situation rather than personal characteristics. I am sorry if my ineffectual abilities for articulating an idea leave anyone confused about my motives.)

Regards,

B
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Arkwright
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« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2010, 08:45:04 am »

Hi B

I have found that my historical (that is to say – fictional) persona has evolved with my writing. He is seldom a main character of my stories (Steampunk Tales and Tales from the Asylum (forthcoming)) but he is often in the background. As a result the back story evolves with the narrative.

At the risk of throwing out a few spoilers:

Arkwright. British Subject.
Date of birth; not known.
Full name: not known.
First recorded reference: South Seas War (1868-74), Battle of Sandy Plain - one of the listed survivors of the Volunteer Infantry Corps.
Engaged after the war by the government in an unspecified capacity - rumoured to be part of the Committee for the Defense of the Crown ("the last line"). Known to have been resident in the Asylum in Lincoln from the early 1890's. Disappeared in 1908.

As you can see I have kept the whole thing vague, particularly the dates. However, I know when he "came into being" and when he departed. The period in between I can now fill with short stories, in which his presence is either made or indirectly felt. For example, at the end of Still Waters (Steampunk Tales, V6) he appears briefly to question the main protagonist. In the Travellers series (forthcoming) he is the instigator of the whole mission, but has to remain behind rather than take part. Tales from the Asylum, on the other hand will feature Arkwright quite heavily, in that he will introduce each of the stories. This is interesting for me, because it allows me to present the way he thinks. It also allows me to describe his departure...

I hope this has been of some use.

TTFN

Arkwright
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« Reply #2 on: April 21, 2010, 08:55:49 am »

As you can see I have kept the whole thing vague, particularly the dates. However, I know when he "came into being" and when he departed....

>snipped<

I hope this has been of some use.

Salutations Arkwright! This is, indeed, interesting information. I have a tendency to be a little too methodical in some things and I could foresee my getting bogged down by working out a intricate time-line for my persona. I like the idea of a more frenetic and serendipitous development, and I especially liked your method of keeping your persona a background figure in your stories. It's so much more shadowy! Smiley

Much appreciated. B
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« Reply #3 on: April 21, 2010, 01:26:42 pm »

Name: Thomas Hacker ( Eng. HMSF)
Once  a gentleman engineer in her majesties elite forces. After many a campaign under the rule of a corrupt and brutal commander , I had had enough , seeing the reputation of H.M forces being brought under disrepute.
I foiled the plans of the fore mentioned commander  and  was labelled a criminal after falsities where created to blacken my good name.
I was forced to go on the run in a strange and foreign land. I stumbled upon a group of fellows in a similar situation and now find myself a maker, engineer and inventor on a not to be named  air vessel of dubious persuasion. Some call us pirates , I say we are survivors.
We travel the globe taking only what we need to get by and making what we cannot acquire..
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« Reply #4 on: April 21, 2010, 03:02:30 pm »

As you can see I have kept the whole thing vague, particularly the dates. However, I know when he "came into being" and when he departed....

>snipped<

I hope this has been of some use.

Salutations Arkwright! This is, indeed, interesting information. I have a tendency to be a little too methodical in some things and I could foresee my getting bogged down by working out a intricate time-line for my persona. I like the idea of a more frenetic and serendipitous development, and I especially liked your method of keeping your persona a background figure in your stories. It's so much more shadowy! Smiley

Much appreciated. B



Well, if we are all sharing...

For me, building a background is an ongoing project. I've toyed with a number of personas since getting interested with steampunk, and for me the two(steampunk/persona) go hand in hand. (I’ve been a roll player since I was young enough to roll dice and Larped for a number of years.) Finding Calliope was all about trial and error. Could I relate to her? Was she fun and not too difficult to ‘put on’ and did I have the right attire/could I make what I wanted her to look like? Most importantly, would I like to go out drinking with her?
She’s an extension of my personality, as much as she is a metaphysical manifestation of what steampunk means to me. I found things I loved and facts about myself, so it was easier to not only share thise ‘new person’ but also share parts of myself at the same time. It made getting to know people easier. For example:

I knew I wanted her to fly. I’ve always loved to fly and my favourite plane is the S.E.5, (look them up, they are the most beautiful things to ever leave the ground). I once had the honour of sitting in a privately owned S.E.5; a biplane fighter aircraft from the First World War called 'Jackdaw'.
I’ve always loved the high fantasy ‘weird science’ aspects of steampunk. I mean who hasn’t wanted a ‘Babbage Relic from Mars’, or a ‘elder god, possessed robot’ of their own? So I knew that her plane would have to be something special.

Being and American, and unable to change my accent without sounding...well...like Dick van Dyke, she was going to have to be American like me. And nothing says American like middle American farmland. So that where she came from.

Over time I built up a story of a young girl, who ran away to join real life, after growing up as a aerial acrobatics pilot in the circus.
One of my favourite black and white movies of Tiny Broadwick (in 1908 at age 15, she became the first person to make a parachute jump from a hot air balloon. She made close to a thousand jumps from balloons while travelling with a carnival) was accompanied by the most amazing ‘Calliope’ music. And so she had a name, Ms. Calliope Jackdaw.

The secrets of her amazing plane and the reasons for her fleeing America will have to remain mere speculation. But I’m sure after a few drinks she’ll be more than happy to tell you about them. 

As of right now, her current profession came about after reading Retribution Falls by Chris Wooding, a book I strongly recommend. Outflyers’ are escort planes that fly with dirigibles as either a security escort, scouting party, or air offence (in the case of some pirates  ) Some fly planes owned by the captain, others bring their own, and Calliope is just that kind. This means at any given time I can talk, mingle and ‘fly’ with anyone I chose, no need to worry about mixing the classes :x

The openness of her history means I can play around with events when asked, but I can also explain, indirectly, a little bit about me. Take snap shots from things you love and no matter how outlandish, I’m sure with a bit of mad science, they will make a really good story. X

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« Reply #5 on: April 21, 2010, 05:05:54 pm »

Hi Calliope

Nice background. I like the potential for it to develop - and as you say mix with any company.

I agree that one of the things I enjoy about Steampunk is amazing machines and the mysterious forces at work. That's one of the reasons I have kept Arkwright in the background. He knows of such things and tries to rationalise them, but he doesn't possess or desire them.

I have just started on an expressionist graphic novel which will include some of those elements (including mysterious menacing automata). It begins with the line: If there is a Supreme power in the Universe, then Damn Arkwright Too Hell!

TTFN

Arkwright
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« Reply #6 on: April 30, 2010, 07:12:27 am »

AT the moment my back Story is a time traveling Artist.  Searching for inspiration he has been through many time periods...and that's about all I've got.
I do have some ideas for his attire though...I dont know how he came apon the time machine for he doesn't have the technical know how to build one....suggestions would be nice
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« Reply #7 on: May 01, 2010, 08:37:32 pm »

Be warned. Exploring back story can be a time consuming business. Admittedly this isn't with relevance the back story of my persona but one of my characters. Ever since I came up with the idea for Fearless I've spent a great deal of time developing the history of my protagonist despite the fact I don't even plan on revealing it until a forthcoming sequel (I'm planning on writing it once I've finished writing Fearless, if it's received well enough). I'm currently perplexed by attempting to get things to fit together and how they would link.
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