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« on: April 13, 2016, 09:29:31 pm »

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« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2016, 10:49:46 pm »

The eye has it!

Nice work  Smiley

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« Reply #2 on: April 14, 2016, 07:57:47 am »

The eye has it!

Nice work  Smiley

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« Reply #3 on: April 14, 2016, 08:37:08 am »

Um ... I'm not saying I don't like it, but isn't the eyebrow the wrong way round?
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« Reply #4 on: April 14, 2016, 08:47:59 am »

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« Reply #5 on: April 14, 2016, 04:33:21 pm »

Um ... I'm not saying I don't like it, but isn't the eyebrow the wrong way round?

It does seem that way.

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« Reply #6 on: April 14, 2016, 09:33:49 pm »

The iris of the eye is really well put together and has a good mix of practical and fantasy. As an illustration I feel like the placement of the eye could be tweaked compositionally. For me, it feels like the cropping is pretty tight and at the moment there is even space either side of the eye.  I wonder whether having a bit more space on the left side of the image might possibly make it feel more interesting compositionally and give the image a bit more space to breathe.
I agree with the others, the eyebrow feels backwards and it is entirely possible that this is part of my difficulty with reading the composition. It sends a mixed message about the directionality of the piece.
This is totally just one person's read of the image though... and please feel free to totally ignore it Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: April 15, 2016, 02:38:30 am »

Um ... I'm not saying I don't like it, but isn't the eyebrow the wrong way round?

Laura is from Mars.  Many pieces of her would be different.
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« Reply #8 on: April 15, 2016, 02:43:22 am »

The iris of the eye is really well put together and has a good mix of practical and fantasy. As an illustration I feel like the placement of the eye could be tweaked compositionally. For me, it feels like the cropping is pretty tight and at the moment there is even space either side of the eye.  I wonder whether having a bit more space on the left side of the image might possibly make it feel more interesting compositionally and give the image a bit more space to breathe.
I agree with the others, the eyebrow feels backwards and it is entirely possible that this is part of my difficulty with reading the composition. It sends a mixed message about the directionality of the piece.
This is totally just one person's read of the image though... and please feel free to totally ignore it Smiley

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« Reply #9 on: April 15, 2016, 08:18:07 am »

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

Um ... I'm not saying I don't like it, but isn't the eyebrow the wrong way round?

If you very carefully indeed at the hairs in the eyebrow, you'll see that the eyebrow is correctly placed; just rather badly shaped.
The eyeliner could have been more skilfully applied as well.

However, your work, LiverandMonk, is fabulous.

I remain yours,
Prof. Cecily
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« Reply #10 on: April 15, 2016, 09:42:45 pm »

Thank you Professor Smiley
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

Um ... I'm not saying I don't like it, but isn't the eyebrow the wrong way round?

If you very carefully indeed at the hairs in the eyebrow, you'll see that the eyebrow is correctly placed; just rather badly shaped.
The eyeliner could have been more skilfully applied as well.

However, your work, LiverandMonk, is fabulous.

I remain yours,
Prof. Cecily
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« Reply #11 on: April 16, 2016, 08:26:50 am »

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
Always at your service, sir.

I remain yours,
Prof. Cecily
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