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Author Topic: Water in the Metropolis [Fiction]  (Read 354 times)
Lothar Erfinder
Snr. Officer
Canada Canada

« on: October 21, 2010, 03:37:54 am »

     It's not particularly steampunk, but I'm quite pleased with it, nonetheless. When I had a look at it before posting, the server said 'fetching preview', which I thought was rather kind of it. I felt it was quite fetching myself.

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Darin Calhoun
United States United States


« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2010, 03:30:03 pm »

A nice scene, repetition is tricky but you kept it short which is always good. The story might be pigeon holed in Urban Fantasy, but this story works just fine for me.
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