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Author Topic: Water in the Metropolis [Fiction]  (Read 329 times)
Lothar Erfinder
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« on: October 21, 2010, 03:37:54 am »

     It's not particularly steampunk, but I'm quite pleased with it, nonetheless. When I had a look at it before posting, the server said 'fetching preview', which I thought was rather kind of it. I felt it was quite fetching myself.




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« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2010, 03:30:03 pm »

A nice scene, repetition is tricky but you kept it short which is always good. The story might be pigeon holed in Urban Fantasy, but this story works just fine for me.
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