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Author Topic: Night Hunt  (Read 392 times)
Zeppelin Captain
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« on: May 05, 2010, 03:22:38 am »

A new short I had that hit me earlier this afternoon.

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Here's an update to the story.  I very much welcome critique and would love to know what some opinions are regarding my writing.  Is it engaging?  Does it leave you desiring more?  Or is it something that's been done before and is uninteresting?

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